Category: My Past

She throw a ball at her coach.

{she} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of {throw}

She throws a ball at her coach.

He turns into a ball.

good

I chersh my dog.

spelling mistake!

cherish

I write slow, but I write good.

good

We odmire school.

spelling mistake! pay attention to the verb {admire}
{school} is a countable noun.

We admire my school.

She turn down him.

{she} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of {turn}
短语 turn dowm 的结构是一个动词+副词构成的词组，代词作宾语必须放中间，him在这里就是代词宾格，所以要放中间。如果是个名词，名词可以放在中间也可以放在后面，但通常放后面。
turn the TV on
turn on the TV

turn it off
turn it on

She turns him down.

We despise bad dog.

{dog} is a countable noun.

We despise the bad dog.

They attend his birthday party.

good

I contempt practice ukualele.

spelling mistake for {ukulele}
ukulele是一个乐器，乐器之前要有冠词
{contempt} is a noun. We can say {show/feel a contempt for sth}.

I feel contempt for practicing the ukulele.

They jump high, but they jop low.

spelling mistake for job, 应该是hop, 对吧？

They jump high， but they hop low.

There is a humid jungle.

good

A turtle lives in it.

good

His name is Jack.

good, 指代物品或者动物的“它”，我们通常用「it」，但是如果在一个故事里有一些拟人的形象，我们用「he」也可以哦！

He has a green body and hard shell.

这里「and」后面的 hard shell 缺少冠词。
英语中「and」连接的并列成分是否可以共用一个冠词「a」或者「the」，有一些常见用法：
1. 若表示由两部分或两种身份组成的一个事物或人，则第二个名词前不用冠词；但如果是表示两样事物或两个人，则两个名词前都要用冠词。
a black and white cat 一只黑白相间的猫
a black and a white cat 一只黑猫和一只白猫

a worker and writer 一位工人兼作家的人
a worker and a writer 一个工人和一个作家

2. 两个名词是成套的物品，两个合用一个冠词。如果两个名词都有冠词，则表示意思分开。
a horse and cart 一辆马车
a horse and a cart 一匹马和一辆车

a knife and fork 一副刀叉
a knife and a fork 一把刀和一把叉

he has a green body and a hard shell

He also has four short feet and a short tail.

good

Irish people love to raising sheep.
Love to do sth.
Irish people love to raise sheep.

Shepherd specially raising sheep.
{Shepherd} is a countable noun, so please use the plural form here.
And the tense is simple present, so the verb should use the original form.
Shepherds specially raise sheep.

Sheep has white fur.
{Sheep} can be singular and plural.
We can use {sheep} as plural or {a sheep} as singular.
A sheep has white fur.
Sheep have white fur.

Sheep likes to ate grass.
The same problem mentioned above.
Like to do sth. Use the original form after {to} here.
Sheep like to eat grass.

wisdom. (n)
I have many wisdom.
{Wisdom} is an uncountable noun. We should use {much} instead of {many}.
I have much wisdom.

He have no wisdom.
{He} is the third personal singular. We should use {has} instead of {have}.
He has no wisdom.

They have some wisdom.
OK！

liger （n）
There was a liger.
Liger are big.
{Liger} is the third personal singular. We should use {is} instead of {are}.
Liger is big.

Liger eat meat.
{Liger} is the third personal singular, so please add an -s at the end of the verb.
Liger eats meat.

turtle live on the riverbank.

The first letter of a sentence should be capitalized.
Also, {turtle} is the third person singular, so please add an -s at the end of the verb.

I’m going to assume Turtle is the name.

Turtle lives on the riverbank.

In this situation, you need to give the name Turtle to the turtle, or reference it using ‘the turtle’.

turtle’s eyesight are bad.

{Eyesight} is an uncountable noun.

Turtle’s eyesight is bad.

turtle also appear at harbor.

{Turtle} is the third person singular, so please add an -s at the end of the verb.
Also, please use the article before {harbor}.

Turtle also appears at the harbor.

there was a grimy turtle at the fild.

You mean {field}?

In this sentence, ‘a turtle’ is correct.
There was a grimy turtle at the field.

river bank (n) 河岸
There were many people at the river bank.
The river bank was long.
The river bank was dirty.

Good!

strolling (v) 散步
He is strolling.
He love to stroll after dinner.

{He} is the third personal singular, so we use {uses} here.

He loves to stroll after dinner.

I hate strolling.

stressed (v) 焦虑
He is very stressed.
I am stressed after my test.
I hate being stressed.

Good!

Foreigner(n)外国人
He is a foreigner.
They are foreigner.

Use the plural form here.

They are foreigners.

I am not a foreigner.

Ok!

immediately (adv.)立即
I eat the pizza immediately.
I ran away immediately.
I sleep immediately.

Good!

soared (v) 高飞
A bird soared in the sky.
The plane soared in the sky.
The wild goose soared in the sky.

Good! But I hope you to pay attention that the original form is {soar}.

Fox are wily.

The plural form of {fox} is to add -es because {fox} is ended with -x.

Foxes are wily.

Fox are also vile.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes are also vile.

Fox like to creep in grass.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes like to creep in the grass.

Fox like to eat pork.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes like to eat pork.