Category: My Past

I cherish my old percle.

{percle}明显spelling mistake, 是要用哪一个单词？

She attends my birthday party.

good！

He has eaten worms for his whole life.

{for his whole life}在语法里, 是可以的，但更常用的方式是将句子里的{for}省略。
这里解释一下句子结构：
无for：句子结构为 subject主语+ predicate verb谓语动词+object宾语 +the whole life （这里它是副词短语作为complement 去modify verb补充说明动作）。
有for：for➕时间段 为介词短语作为时间状语来解释说明句子实现。

He has eaten worms (for) his whole life.

He runs slow, but he jump high.

{he}-第三人称单数哦！后面的jump要加-s.

He runs slow, but he jumps high.

I turn into a pig.

good! 句子含义是如果吧pig换成更棒的就更好了.

We despise cars and airplane.

{airplane} countable noun.

We despise cars and airplanes.

They admire cow.

1. admire还是和昨天的作业一样，它表示一种欣赏，欣赏好的品质，崇拜英雄或者正在欣赏一处风景，欣赏着自己的一台车。
2. {cow} countable noun.

They are admiring a cow.

He runs to the concert.

good!

My cat ate like a cow.

{ate}这里的是想用act like来表达行为举止像 a cow吗？

My cat acts like a cow.

She contempts making food.

本句缺少动词，而{contempt}作为名词 无法充当谓语动词使用。在这里可以使用feel/show contempt for sth.

She shows/feels contempt for making food.

They contempt computer work.

本句缺少动词，而{contempt}作为名词 无法充当谓语动词使用。在这里可以使用feel contempt for sth.

They feel contempt for computer work.

I turn right to park.

{park}为普通可数名词，通常要有a/the冠词连用。

I turn right to the park.

She has learned writing for 20 years

good！

We cut the potatos.

名词变成复数的时候，有一些特殊情况-es
例如：
tomato－tomatoes
potato－potatoes
hero－heroes

potatoes

He attends his school a feld trip.

1. {attend school} 为固定搭配。同第一句解析。
2. {a feld trip} should be {field trip}, please watch out your spelling.
3. {attend school}与{a filed trip}之间可以改成： a school field trip;

He attends a school field trip.

Her humstar runs around inside a ball.

hamster

They dispise thers school.

要注意拼写错误{dispise} {thers}。

They despise their school.

She runs slow, but she was smart.

1. {runs}和{was}，前后时态不一致，runs是现在时，was是be动词「am /is/ are」的过去式，需要统一时态。描述客观现状，一般现在时就可以。

She runs slow, but she is smart.

His mom turn into a aligeter.

1. {aligeter}should be{alligator}, 这个名词前加不定冠词的时候，要用an. 同样类型的单词还有: an apple; an egg.
2. {His mom} is the third person singular, please add -s at the end of {turn}

His mom turns into an alligator.

He learns slow, but he runs fast.

good！

She need to attends a school。

1. { She } is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {need}.
2. 注意固定用法：need to do sth. 表示需要去做某事。 to do 在句子中 后面要接动词的原型 {to attend}.
3. 注意固定搭配：attend school，这里 attend=go to, 中间无需加冠词。类似的还有attend church.
4. {。}英文的句号是{.}

She needs to attend school.

We has eaten egg for 20 years.

1. {We}-plural form, so please use {have}.
2. {egg}-可数名词，please add -s.

We have eaten eggs for 20 years.

I admire cat because it cute。

1. {cat}-可数名词，please add -s.
2. {because}作为连词连接两个完整的句子, 其后面的{it cute}并不是个完整的句子，它有主语I,也有表语形容词cute，但缺少系动词。同时主语it代指前面的cats, 是一个plural form, 所以要把it变成they。
3. {admire sth.} to look at sth and think that it is attractive and/or impressive.
表达欣赏赞美的眼光来观赏某物。
如：I am admiring my new car.
Let’s just sit and admire the view.
而句子中表达的是一种对事物的喜爱，所以我们可以使用如下用法。

I like cats because they are cute.
I love cats because they are cute.
I adore cats because they are cute.
I am fond of cats because they are cute.

They walk into the house.

good!

He turns into a monstor.

monster

I cherish my new shoes.

good!

My dog bite my paper.

{bite}- 已经结束的动作用过去时。
bite-bit

My dog bit my paper.

I turn down his permassion.

permission

She have readen book for 2 years.

1. {She}-the third person singular, please use {has}.
2. {read} 词形变化为现在时read， 过去时red, 过去分词即用于have/has done结构中时为red. please remember:read-red-red
3. {book}-countable noun. please use plural form.

She has red books for 2 years.

They saw a bird outside the window.

good!

I hate to eat lunch.
Ok!

We admire game.
{Game} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
We admire games.

I contempt homework.
{Contempt} is a noun. We should say {show a contempt for something.}.
I show a contempt for homework.

A apple falls dawn.
{Apple} starts with a vowel and we use {an} as the article.
An apple falls dawn.

She despises dog.
{Dog} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
She despises dogs.

He eats pizzas.
Ok!

They cherish chicken.
Ok!

I shake my body.
Ok!

She jumps high.
Ok!

He contempts this team.
{Contempt} is a noun. We should say {show a contempt for something.}
He shows a contempt for this team.

He attends a soccer game.
Ok!

They went to Mc Donald.
Ok!

We write a letter.
Ok!

She turns down him.
{Him} is a personal pronoun that should be placed between {turn} and {down}.
She turns him down.

My rabbit admire carrot.
{ My rabbit } is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {admire}.
{Carrot} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
My rabbit admires carrots.

He despises soccer.
{Soccer} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
He despises soccer.

His cat jumps at his home.
We always say {at home} or {in one’s home}.
His cat jumps at home.
His cat jumps in his home.

They cherish basketballs.
Ok!

I protect my cat.
Ok!

We attend a school.
Ok!

He attend a party.
The third person singular.
He attends a party.

She drinks lemonade.
Ok!

Do you wants to go to the N Park.
Ok!

They hate him.
Ok!

We run to the market.
Ok!

My dog barks.
Ok!

I read a book.
Ok!

They admire computer.
{Computer} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
They admire computers.

He cherish his fish.
The third person singular. Add -es to the end of {cherish}.
He cherishes his fish.

They turn me down.
Ok!

She hates to eats Pizza.

Remember {hate to do sth}.
{Pizza} is a countable noun.
Also, pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

She hates to eat pizzas.

We bite off the pieces off the meat.

There is an additional {off}. Delete it.

We bite the pieces off the meat.

They despise him.

Ok!

My cat runs around In my home.

Pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

My cat runs around in my home.

I contempt to read.

{Contempt} is a noun. We can say {show a contempt for sth}.

I show a contempt for reading.

A fish swims In water.

Pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

A fish swims in water.

cats cherishs its things.

The first letter of a sentence should be capitalized.
And the third person singular form for {cherish} is to add -es.
But {cats} are plural here, so use the original form of the verb.

Cats cherish their things.
The cat cherishes its things.

I admire dogs.

Good!

She likes to jog.

Good!

I despise writing.

Ok!

He runs to the school.

Good!

We squeezed the lemon.

Good!

She cuts the pizza.

Good!

I despise vegtable.

Watch your spelling! Vegetable! Also use plural form please.

I despise vegetables.

They contempt those work.

{Contempt} is a noun. We always say {show contempt for something}.

They show contempt for those work.

We hate to do the work.

Good!

I adore hamberger.

Watch your spelling! Hamburger! Also, {hamburger} is a countable noun.

I adore hamburgers.

A cat hides its things.

Good!

We slide down the Park Slide.

Good!

He cherishs the food he had.

The third person singular form of {cherish} is to add -es because it is ended with -sh.
Keep the same tense here.

He cherishes the food he has.
He cherished the food he had.

A duck is swimming on the water.

I believe part of the duck is in the water.

A duck is swimming in the water.

She admire to the chicken.

Admire something.
{She} is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {admire}.

She admires the chicken.

The cat is despise to it cat food.

We say {despise something}.
{The cat} is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {despise}.
Please distinguish {it} and {its}.

The cat despises its cat food.

I cherish my new computer.

Good!

My crazy cat jump and run in my house.

{My crazy cat} is the third person singular, so please add an s at the end of {jump} and {run}.

My crazy cat jumps and runs in my house.

They throw the eggs to Peop’s window.

You mean people?

They throw the eggs to people’s window.

A chicken cherish its eggs.

{A chicken} is the third person singular, so please add -es at the end of {cherish}.

A chicken cherishes its eggs.

They admire to the airplanes.

Admire something.

They admire the airplanes.

She despise to her old akelele.

What is akelele? Watch your handwriting!
Also, we say {despise something}.
{She} is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {despise}.

She despises her old friend.

My dog will shakes when he saw a rat.

{Will} should be followed by the original form of a verb.

My dog will shake when he saw a rat.

She need to had a rest because She bump her head when she jump.

Need to do something!
{She} is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {need} {bump} {jump).

She needs to have a rest because She bumps her head when she jumps.