essay by owen-12-04

turtle live on the riverbank.

The first letter of a sentence should be capitalized.
Also, {turtle} is the third person singular, so please add an -s at the end of the verb.

I’m going to assume Turtle is the name.

Turtle lives on the riverbank.

In this situation, you need to give the name Turtle to the turtle, or reference it using ‘the turtle’.

turtle’s eyesight are bad.

{Eyesight} is an uncountable noun.

Turtle’s eyesight is bad.

turtle also appear at harbor.

{Turtle} is the third person singular, so please add an -s at the end of the verb.
Also, please use the article before {harbor}.

Turtle also appears at the harbor.

there was a grimy turtle at the fild.

You mean {field}?

In this sentence, ‘a turtle’ is correct.
There was a grimy turtle at the field.

Vocab by owen-12-02

river bank (n) 河岸
There were many people at the river bank.
The river bank was long.
The river bank was dirty.

Good!

strolling (v) 散步
He is strolling.
He love to stroll after dinner.

{He} is the third personal singular, so we use {uses} here.

He loves to stroll after dinner.

I hate strolling.

stressed (v) 焦虑
He is very stressed.
I am stressed after my test.
I hate being stressed.

Good!

Vocab by owen-11-30

Foreigner(n)外国人
He is a foreigner.
They are foreigner.

Use the plural form here.

They are foreigners.

I am not a foreigner.

Ok!

immediately (adv.)立即
I eat the pizza immediately.
I ran away immediately.
I sleep immediately.

Good!

Essay by owen-11-28

Fox are wily.

The plural form of {fox} is to add -es because {fox} is ended with -x.

Foxes are wily.

Fox are also vile.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes are also vile.

Fox like to creep in grass.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes like to creep in the grass.

Fox like to eat pork.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes like to eat pork.

Vocab by owen-11-27

eyesight (n) 视力
His eyesight was bad.
There eyesight were bad.

You mean {their}? Please distinguish {their} and {there}.
Also {eyesight} is uncountable, so we use third person singular here.

Their eyesight was bad.

They have bad eyesight.

Good!

Vocab by douglas-11-26

Vocab by douglas-11-26
The cat was pating cat food.

{Pat} is a consonant-vowel-consonant structure that needs to be double written with -t followed by -ing.

The cat was patting cat food.

He was reading a book.
The cats were playing.

I had drunk some water.
He had eaten a burger.
She had seen a cat.

I had been watching this video.
It had been drinking corrosive liquid.
He had been reading.

I ate food.
I saw him.
I wanted it.

cupboard noun
a piece of furniture or a space for storing things with a ? or doors and usually with shelves

Pay attention to your handwriting. OK?

It is a the cupboard.

Two articles?

It is a cupboard.

We need a new cupboard.
I want to buy a cupboard.

orchestra noun
a large group of musicians who play many different instruments together and are led by a conductor

The orchestra played badly.
The orchestra is not performing.
Who is this orchestra’s conductor?

jig noun
an energetic traditional dance of Great Britain and Ireland or the music that is played for such a dance

He is playing jig.
He loves jig.
I hate jig very much!

cavern a large cave
He lives in a cavern.
It went into the cavern.
There are many animals in this cavern.

The dog was playing it.
He was eat some disgusting food.

The present continuous tense:the form of the verb should be {be doing}

He was eating some disgusting food.

They were playing basketball.

Mark -11-27-2023-10:17

I cherish my old percle.

{percle}明显spelling mistake, 是要用哪一个单词?

She attends my birthday party.

good!

He has eaten worms for his whole life.

{for his whole life}在语法里, 是可以的,但更常用的方式是将句子里的{for}省略。
这里解释一下句子结构:
无for:句子结构为 subject主语+ predicate verb谓语动词+object宾语 +the whole life (这里它是副词短语作为complement 去modify verb补充说明动作)。
有for:for➕时间段 为介词短语作为时间状语来解释说明句子实现。

He has eaten worms (for) his whole life.

He runs slow, but he jump high.

{he}-第三人称单数哦!后面的jump要加-s.

He runs slow, but he jumps high.

I turn into a pig.

good! 句子含义是如果吧pig换成更棒的就更好了.

We despise cars and airplane.

{airplane} countable noun.

We despise cars and airplanes.

They admire cow.

1. admire还是和昨天的作业一样,它表示一种欣赏,欣赏好的品质,崇拜英雄或者正在欣赏一处风景,欣赏着自己的一台车。
2. {cow} countable noun.

They are admiring a cow.

He runs to the concert.

good!

My cat ate like a cow.

{ate}这里的是想用act like来表达行为举止像 a cow吗?

My cat acts like a cow.

She contempts making food.

本句缺少动词,而{contempt}作为名词 无法充当谓语动词使用。在这里可以使用feel/show contempt for sth.

She shows/feels contempt for making food.

Mark -11-26-2023-10:40-2

They contempt computer work.

本句缺少动词,而{contempt}作为名词 无法充当谓语动词使用。在这里可以使用feel contempt for sth.

They feel contempt for computer work.

I turn right to park.

{park}为普通可数名词,通常要有a/the冠词连用。

I turn right to the park.

She has learned writing for 20 years

good!

We cut the potatos.

名词变成复数的时候,有一些特殊情况-es
例如:
tomato-tomatoes
potato-potatoes
hero-heroes

potatoes

He attends his school a feld trip.

1. {attend school} 为固定搭配。同第一句解析。
2. {a feld trip} should be {field trip}, please watch out your spelling.
3. {attend school}与{a filed trip}之间可以改成: a school field trip;

He attends a school field trip.

Her humstar runs around inside a ball.

hamster

They dispise thers school.

要注意拼写错误{dispise} {thers}。

They despise their school.

She runs slow, but she was smart.

1. {runs}和{was},前后时态不一致,runs是现在时,was是be动词「am /is/ are」的过去式,需要统一时态。描述客观现状,一般现在时就可以。

She runs slow, but she is smart.

His mom turn into a aligeter.

1. {aligeter}should be{alligator}, 这个名词前加不定冠词的时候,要用an. 同样类型的单词还有: an apple; an egg.
2. {His mom} is the third person singular, please add -s at the end of {turn}

His mom turns into an alligator.

He learns slow, but he runs fast.

good!