Mark -12-12-2023-10:04

lungs help us breath.

首字母大写
breath: n
breathe: v

Lungs help us breathe.

lungs can outo-breath

首字母大写
breath: n
breathe: v
自动的前缀是:auto 而肺部自主呼吸自动呼吸有常用组合:spontaneously breathe

Lungs can auto-breathe/spontaneously breathe.

People must has lungs

good

I use sack to clean the table.

good

I bye a sack today.

buy

He lost his sack.

good

Mark -12-12-2023-10:03

Cat are Independence animal.

1.Independence: noun. 如果要修饰名词animal,要变成他的形容词形式:independent
2.句子结构:主语+系动词+表语 句中单词无特殊情况无需大写开头字母。
3.cat和animal都是可数名词,要复数形式。

Cats are independent animals.

We are Independence.

1.Independence: noun.
2.句子结构:主语+系动词+表语 这里表语要用形容词性 independent
3.句中单词无特殊情况无需大写开头字母。

We are independent.

He is Independence.

同上

He is independent.

The lions are violence.

1.violence: noun. violent behaviour that is intended to hurt or kill sb
violent: adj.
2.lion是可数名词,作为主语可以用复数形式表泛指一个种类。 名词作为主语情况一般是:名词复数形式/the➕名词单数/A➕名词单数
若是the+复数形式作为主语,在这里要清楚它是用the来特指这群狮子或者这个种类的狮子。
3.be动词后➕形容词作表语。

The lions are violent.

He is violence.

1.violence: noun. violent behaviour that is intended to hurt or kill sb
violent: adj.
2.be动词后➕形容词作表语。

He is violent.

I am violence.

same as above

I am violent.

I am been educated.

am 和 been 不可同时使用,am 为一般现在时使用,been 通常是 have/had been 这样使用,用于完成时。

I am educated.
I have been educated.

He isn’t educated.

good

She isn’t educated before.

before这个时间状语通常用于一般过去时的标志。

She wasn’t educated before.

He is a lawyer.

good

I am a lawyer.

good

She is a lawyer.

good

This boss don’t gives any salary.

don’t+动词原型 gives去掉s
give sb.sth/ give sth. to sb.

This boss don’t give us any salary.

every month boss will give salary.

every 位于句首要大写首字母
every month指每个月,通常用于一般现在时
boss 可数名词 要加冠词或者所有格 the boss/ my boss
give sb.sth/ give sth. to sb.
salary 可数名词 a salary指每月的工资

Every month, my boss gives me a salary.

He uses the salary too fast.

good

People throw rag to ocean.

rag: countable noun

People throw rags to ocean.

rag bag can be reciacle.

rag bag 可数名词
句首单词首字母大写
reciacle 拼写错误, recycle: v. 这里可用它的形容词 recycled 可循环利用的

The rag bag can be recycled.

I love to use rag bag.

rag bag 可数名词 所以要变成复数形式

I love to use rag bags.

She loves olive color.

good,再不特殊强调,且没有误会的情景下,直接说 She loves olive 就可

Olive is a good color.

good

I have one olive color shirt.

这里olive作为形容词可以直接修饰shirt, 表示橄榄色的

I have one olive shirt.

This food is native.

good

I bring native plant to Franch.

plant is a countable noun, please add -s.
France 是名词法国。

I bring native plants to France.

I plant some native plant.

plant is a countable noun, please add -s.

I plant some native plants.

I learned Irish accent.

accent 作为口音来讲 一般是countable noun, 所以Irish accent前要加冠词,表特指强调。

I learned the Irish accent.

I go to the Irish.

Ireland n. 爱尔兰
Irish adj. 爱尔兰人的 爱尔兰语的
国家名词是专有名词,无需冠词

>I go to Ireland.

Some people think Irish are a good country.

Ireland n. 爱尔兰
Irish adj. 爱尔兰人的 爱尔兰语的
国家名词是专有名词,无需冠词
爱尔兰是一个国家,后面的be动词无需复数。

Some people think Ireland is a good country.

I’m surely of the topic.

off the topic 离题

I’m surely off the topic.

She is surely its safe.

adv.当然;无疑;必定 副词修饰形容词,动词,句子,但不可作为主句成分。
句子结构上 主语+be动词+表语,主句she is its safe肯定不对,可以改成 she is safe.
而加上副词surely用来修饰形容词,表强调肯定她是安全的。

She is surely safe.

We all surely we finshed our work

adv.当然;无疑;必定 副词修饰形容词,动词,句子,但不可作为主句成分。
finish有拼写错误
这个句子是一个从句结构,但也逃不开句子结构:sub+verb+object clause, we主语,宾语从句we finished our work,副词surely肯定不是verb, 所以句子缺少动词成分。句意为我们保证完成了我们的任务,动词可以选择guarantee, 前面是一般现在时,后面也通常保持时态一致的现在时,而已经完成了的动作,我们用现在完成时。

We guarantee we have finished our work

Mark -12-08-2023-11:38

I throw a apple at him.

apple 以元音音素开头的可数名词,前面要用an

I throw an apple at him.

We buy a lot of supply.

supply作为不可数名词指the act of supplying sth
在你的句子中supply是表达the things such as food, medicines, fuel, etc. that are needed by a group of people, for example an army or expedition,是他的可数名词用法

We buy a lot of supplies.

She sees her’s cat at school.

her’s 明显错误,her就是所有格

She sees her cat at school.

They had a good news.

news-uncountable noun

They had good news.

He attends my birthday party.

good

My cat jumps on my sofa.

good

He ates lot but he did’t get fat.

eat:过去式 ate
单三 eats
动词的过去式没有第三人称单数的特殊形式哦!
a lot 固定词组作为副词修饰动词表示「很多,非常」

He ate a lot but he did’t get fat.

I walk to my big, white school.

good

They eat small, meat pizza.

pizza在这里是可数名词 一整张披萨

They eat a small, meat pizza.

She sees a orange, big orange.

当形容词修饰名词的时候,一般顺序为:大小+颜色+n

She sees a big, orange orange.

Mark -12-09-2023-07:40

I throw my blue, small pencil at him.

blue,small 都是coordinate adjectives, 当adj. 修饰名词的时候,一般顺序为:大小+颜色+n

I throw my small, blue pencil at him.

We turn into 3 monstors.

monsters.

They cook cookies for the party.

good

She walks down the stier.

stair 注意拼写, 同时它是个可数名词。

stairs

I attend my friend’s birthday party.

good

He works slow, but he’s work is bad.

but 表示转折,slow和bad都是形容不好的事物,不需要转折,用and即可
he的所有格是his

He works slow, and his work is bad.

Farmer’s chicken runs out the farm.

run out 表示耗尽用尽 为不及物动词词组
run out of 为及物动词 +地点 表示跑出哪里

Farmer’s chicken runs out of the farm.

My cat chiesses me at living room.

spelling mistake
living room is a countable noun, please add {the} before it.

My cat chases me at the living room.

We play soccer together.

good!

I finsh my long, big, boring homework.

finsh:spelling mistake
long, big, boring homework:修饰作业,一般不用long and big, 一般用heavy

I finish my boring, heavy homework.

Mark -12-11-2023-10:11

I trained ever month.

1. ever 在这里spelling mistake,should be every
2.「train」can be both n and verb.
as a noun, 作为一种交通工具时,常见用法有:
to get on/off a train
I go to SZ by train.
as a verb, train-trained(过去时)trains(第三人称单数形式)
可及物也可不及物,常见表达:
sb. train sth. 锻炼,培养(某一素质或能力)
train sb. to do sth.训练某人去做某事
train for sth.为某项活动或赛事去训练

I trained (for the race)every month.

I zipped my bag.

good

Mark -12-01-2023-09:33

A white cat jump around In my house.

{A white cat} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of verb.
句中的{In}, pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

A white cat jumps around in my house.

My tall dad hug me.

{My tall dad} is the third person singular

My tall dad hugs me.

I throw two eggs at my mom.

good

She odmire black dogs.

spelling mistake! pay attention to the verb {admire}
{she} is the third person singular
admire它表示一种欣赏,欣赏好的品质,崇拜英雄或者正在欣赏一处风景,观赏者某事物。

She is admiring black dogs.

We attend our teacher party.

在这里,老师的party,是对party表示所属关系,英语名词的所有格表示所属关系。我们在可数名词party前要加所属格,表示“…的…”,常用的人称表示所属格的有my, your, his, her, their。还有其他名词,一般情况包括单数名词和不带词尾 s 的复数名词,加 ‘s:teacher’s party, Jack’s book

We attend our teacher’s party.

He turn into a elire.

{he} is the third person singular
elire 注意拼写
elite 前面要用 an elite

He turns into an elite.

His green bird shoute at me.

shoute 注意拼写
{His green bird} is the third person singular

His green bird shouts at me.

They overlap the papers.

good

He learn fast, but he write bad.

{he} is the third person singular

He learns fast, but he writes bad.

I read slow, but I know the book.

good

Mark -11-29-2023-09:05

She throw a ball at her coach.

{she} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of {throw}

She throws a ball at her coach.

He turns into a ball.

good

I chersh my dog.

spelling mistake!

cherish

I write slow, but I write good.

good

We odmire school.

spelling mistake! pay attention to the verb {admire}
{school} is a countable noun.

We admire my school.

She turn down him.

{she} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of {turn}
短语 turn dowm 的结构是一个动词+副词构成的词组,代词作宾语必须放中间,him在这里就是代词宾格,所以要放中间。如果是个名词,名词可以放在中间也可以放在后面,但通常放后面。
turn the TV on
turn on the TV

turn it off
turn it on

She turns him down.

We despise bad dog.

{dog} is a countable noun.

We despise the bad dog.

They attend his birthday party.

good

I contempt practice ukualele.

spelling mistake for {ukulele}
ukulele是一个乐器,乐器之前要有冠词
{contempt} is a noun. We can say {show/feel a contempt for sth}.

I feel contempt for practicing the ukulele.

They jump high, but they jop low.

spelling mistake for job, 应该是hop, 对吧?

They jump high, but they hop low.

Mark -11-29-2023-08:59

There is a humid jungle.

good

A turtle lives in it.

good

His name is Jack.

good, 指代物品或者动物的“它”,我们通常用「it」,但是如果在一个故事里有一些拟人的形象,我们用「he」也可以哦!

He has a green body and hard shell.

这里「and」后面的 hard shell 缺少冠词。
英语中「and」连接的并列成分是否可以共用一个冠词「a」或者「the」,有一些常见用法:
1. 若表示由两部分或两种身份组成的一个事物或人,则第二个名词前不用冠词;但如果是表示两样事物或两个人,则两个名词前都要用冠词。
a black and white cat 一只黑白相间的猫
a black and a white cat 一只黑猫和一只白猫

a worker and writer 一位工人兼作家的人
a worker and a writer 一个工人和一个作家

2. 两个名词是成套的物品,两个合用一个冠词。如果两个名词都有冠词,则表示意思分开。
a horse and cart 一辆马车
a horse and a cart 一匹马和一辆车

a knife and fork 一副刀叉
a knife and a fork 一把刀和一把叉

he has a green body and a hard shell

He also has four short feet and a short tail.

good

Essay by owen-12-06

Irish people love to raising sheep.
Love to do sth.
Irish people love to raise sheep.

Shepherd specially raising sheep.
{Shepherd} is a countable noun, so please use the plural form here.
And the tense is simple present, so the verb should use the original form.
Shepherds specially raise sheep.

Sheep has white fur.
{Sheep} can be singular and plural.
We can use {sheep} as plural or {a sheep} as singular.
A sheep has white fur.
Sheep have white fur.

Sheep likes to ate grass.
The same problem mentioned above.
Like to do sth. Use the original form after {to} here.
Sheep like to eat grass.

Vocab by owen-12-07

wisdom. (n)
I have many wisdom.
{Wisdom} is an uncountable noun. We should use {much} instead of {many}.
I have much wisdom.

He have no wisdom.
{He} is the third personal singular. We should use {has} instead of {have}.
He has no wisdom.

They have some wisdom.
OK!

liger (n)
There was a liger.
Liger are big.

{Liger} is the third personal singular. We should use {is} instead of {are}.
Liger is big.