Essay by nina-12-15

Animals in the park

S→subject
V→verb
O→object
n→noun

When Grandpa(s) come(v)to visit(o)(noun), we (s)like(v)to go(o)for walk.
{Grandpa} is the third person singular, so add an -s at the end of {come}.
And we say {go for a walk}.
When Grandpa(s) comes(v)to visit(o), we (s)like(v)to go(o)for a walk.

First, we(s)go(v)to the store(o).
Ok!

Grandpa (s)buys(v)some seeds and nuts(o).
Ok!

Then we(s)go(v)to the park(o).
Ok!

Grandpa(s)shows(v)me(o/noun) how to feed the birds and squirrels.
Ok!

We(subject) give(verb) them seeds and nuts to eat. (noun) (to) (verb)

这句不太明白→Soon all the small animals come to me.
Soon(adv) all the small animals(s) come(v) to me.(o)

I (s)enjoy feeding them.→(noun)
Verb?

Doing is used as an object here.
I (s)enjoy(v) feeding them(o).

I(s)think(v)they(o/n)like seeds and nuts, and they (s)like(v)us(o/n)too.
There is a clause here.
I(s)think(v)(they like seeds and nuts)(clause of objective), and they (s)like(v)us(o/n)too.

Vocab by owen-12-14

Hastily (adv) 匆忙地
I hastily go to school.
I hastily finish my homework.
I hastily run to the station.

Good!

bin (n)
I hide in the bin.
The bin was big.
There were a big bin.

{A big bin} is singular, so we use {was} here.
There was a big bin.

Essay by owen-12-1

I hate mosquito.
{Mosquito} is a countable noun. You can say {a mosquito} or {mosquitos}.
I hate mosquitos.

There are mosquito at swamp.
The same problem mentioned above. Use {mosquitos} here.
And we always say {in swamp}.
There are mosquitos in swamp.

We riddance the mosquito away.
{Riddance} is a noun. You should use a verb here.
We drive the mosquito away.

protest (as a verb) is commonly used with preoposition ‘against’.
I protest against violence.
I protest against child abuse.

I protested I hate mosquito.
What you mean to say here is probably to complain:

I complain about mosquitoes.
I protest against mosquitoes

{Mosquito} is a countable noun. You can say {a mosquito} or {mosquitos}.
Also please keep the tense the same.
I protested that I hated mosquitos.

Mosquito drink blood.
The same problem mentioned before.
Mosquitos drink blood.

Mark -12-14-2023-11:13

I am panic.
He was panic.
My cat is panic.
They make panic.

good

We was panic.

we是我们,本身就是复数含义。 we +are/were…

We were panic.

Greek is a country.
He lives In Greek.
I live In Greek.

Greek:n.希腊人;希腊语 adj. 希腊的希腊人的
Greece:希腊
注意In 在句中 无需首字母大写!

Greece is a country.
He lives in Greece.
I live in Greece.

This house is ancient.
This knife is ancient.

good

Fight happen even in ancient.

fight 指战争战斗的时候 可数名词
ancient: 大多数是形容词, 作为名词是指古代人。 在古时候的词组:in ancient time

Fights happen even in ancient time.

He is a shepherd.
I am a shepherd.
They are shepherds.

good

I like flute.
He plays flute.
She bracks the flute.

flute: 可数名词
演奏长笛:play the flute. 乐器前一般都要有定冠词the, like: play the guitar/play the piano
bracks: spelling mistake

I like the flute.
He plays the flute.
She breaks the flute.

He has cool appearance.
I have cool appearance.
lion has cool appearance.

appearance:可数名词
lion 可数名词
位于句首的单词 首字母大写!

He has a cool appearance.
I have a cool appearance.
The lion has a cool appearance.

It was fearful.

good

I saw a fearful things.
It is fearfully.

1. fearful: be fearful of sth/that+clause./to do 因…而担忧害怕
举例:
Bankers were fearful of a world banking crisis。
Parents are ever fearful for their children.
We made a fearful mess of the room.
a fearful glance
2. a 不可与名词复数连用。
3. 它的副词: fearfully 副词不可直接位于be动词后。
be动词+形容词

I saw a fearful thing.
It is fearful.

This is the origin.

good

This are the waters origin.

1. This is…
These are…
2. 水的起源:the origin of water 一般无生命的物体要表示“…的”不接’s作为所有格,可以用… of…

This is the origin of water.

people origin here.

origin: n. 它的动词形式:originate

people originated here.

He is foolish.
My cat is foolish.
I’m foolish.

good

Vocab by owen-12-11

anxious (adj) 焦虑的
He is anxious.
After the test, I was anxious.
They are anxious.

Good!

strays (v) 偏离的
The original form of the word is {stray}.

Every time he write essay, He strays the topic.
{He} is the third person singular, so we add an -s at the end of {write}.
{Essay} is a countable noun, so please use an article here.
And the letter {H} should be capitalized here.
Every time he writes an essay, he strays the topic.

I strays the destination.
{I} is the first person singular, so the verb should be in the original form.
I stray the destination.

They strays where they are ???
{They} is the third person plural, so the verb should be in the original form.
And watch your handwriting.
They stray where they are.

Essay by owen-12-09

The wolf tore the beef into half.
Good!

The wolf ranted to me.
Good!

The wolf scowled at me.
Good!

The wolf riddance me away.
{Riddance} is a noun. You can use {expel} here.
The wolf expelled me away.

The wolf like to eat lambs.
{The wolf} is the third person singular, so you need to add an -s at the end of the verb.
The wolf like to eat lambs.

Mark -12-13-2023-09:53

I have average foods.
We don’t get average homeworks.
Teacher give average book to us.

1. 总体来说,用法都比较奇怪。
average 虽然也有ordinary; not special的意思,但习惯用法搭配如下,like:
I was just an average sort of student 我就是个一般的学生
I am average. 我很一般
I scored very average on my math test.成绩一般
The average price is two rmbs 平均价格
The food is average. 食物很一般。
The book is just average.这本书很一般。
an average rate/cost/price 平均费率 / 成本 / 价格
The average adult man 普通成年男子

2. homework: uncountable noun
teacher 第三人称单数 ,动词加s
average book:【经】(银行的)帐面平均存款余额
book: 可数名词

I have average foods.
We don’t get standard/typical homework
The teacher gives ordinary/unexceptional books to us.

I have a pair of shoes.
I have a pair sock.
I got a pair of colored shirt.

1. pair: 可数名词
常用固定词组 a pair of…
a pair of gloves/shoes/earrings
一副手套、一双鞋、一对耳环
a pair of trousers/pants/jeans
一条长裤、裤子、牛仔裤等

2. shooce 拼写错误
一样的颜色的shirt 一对相同颜色的衬衫也就是两件一样颜色的衬衫,一般衬衫不论“对儿”。
shoe, sock, shirt都是可数名词

I have a pair of shoes.
I have a pair of socks.
I got two shirts in the same color.

He is donations.
People donations to pore people.
Donations’ a good things.

1. donation: n 赠送;捐赠物 它为名词哦! 它的动词是: donate
2. pore拼写错误
donations 后面的系动词要用are

He makes large donations.
People donate to poor people.
Donations are good things.

consider:(尤指为作出决定而)仔细考虑,细想
认为…;顾及体谅;注视

She considered her options.
We’re considering buying a new car.
This award is considered (to be) a great honour.这项奖被视为极大的荣誉。
You should consider other people before you act.你在行动之前应当考虑到别人。
He stood there, considering the painting.他站在那里,凝视着那幅画。

I consider things.

good

People need consider every time.

need to do sth.
consider是及物动词后面要接宾语

People need to consider it every time.

We are consider now.

be+Ving 表示正在进行的动作 are considering 正在思考; be watching TV 正在看电视

We are considering it now.

receive: verb!
receive sth 得到某物
receive sth.from sb. 从某人某处得到某物
receive a letter/present/phone call收到信 / 礼物;接到电话
receive information/payment/thanks接收信息 / 付款;受到感谢
We received a warm welcome from our hosts.

I received my toy.

good

My cat received her food.

good

He receiveds his shoes.

receive是原型
received是它的过去式
receives是它的第三人称单数

He receiveds his shoes.

Mark -12-13-2023-09:54

I know the basic word.

good

He knows the basic work.

good

We know all the basic actions.

good

We had charity shop.

charity shop: countable noun

We had charity shops.

I give money to charity school.

charity school: countable noun

I give money to charity schools.

No body charity to the pure city.

no body:主语 nobody连在一起的 nobody=no one 后面接动词是用第三人称单数形式
charity: n
to the pure city: 不定式表目的地
这个句子里没有动词,所以缺少谓语动词成分。 可以用donate money 捐款。
poor city 拼写错误

Nobody donates money to the poor city.

Mark -12-12-2023-10:04

lungs help us breath.

首字母大写
breath: n
breathe: v

Lungs help us breathe.

lungs can outo-breath

首字母大写
breath: n
breathe: v
自动的前缀是:auto 而肺部自主呼吸自动呼吸有常用组合:spontaneously breathe

Lungs can auto-breathe/spontaneously breathe.

People must has lungs

good

I use sack to clean the table.

good

I bye a sack today.

buy

He lost his sack.

good

Mark -12-12-2023-10:03

Cat are Independence animal.

1.Independence: noun. 如果要修饰名词animal,要变成他的形容词形式:independent
2.句子结构:主语+系动词+表语 句中单词无特殊情况无需大写开头字母。
3.cat和animal都是可数名词,要复数形式。

Cats are independent animals.

We are Independence.

1.Independence: noun.
2.句子结构:主语+系动词+表语 这里表语要用形容词性 independent
3.句中单词无特殊情况无需大写开头字母。

We are independent.

He is Independence.

同上

He is independent.

The lions are violence.

1.violence: noun. violent behaviour that is intended to hurt or kill sb
violent: adj.
2.lion是可数名词,作为主语可以用复数形式表泛指一个种类。 名词作为主语情况一般是:名词复数形式/the➕名词单数/A➕名词单数
若是the+复数形式作为主语,在这里要清楚它是用the来特指这群狮子或者这个种类的狮子。
3.be动词后➕形容词作表语。

The lions are violent.

He is violence.

1.violence: noun. violent behaviour that is intended to hurt or kill sb
violent: adj.
2.be动词后➕形容词作表语。

He is violent.

I am violence.

same as above

I am violent.

I am been educated.

am 和 been 不可同时使用,am 为一般现在时使用,been 通常是 have/had been 这样使用,用于完成时。

I am educated.
I have been educated.

He isn’t educated.

good

She isn’t educated before.

before这个时间状语通常用于一般过去时的标志。

She wasn’t educated before.

He is a lawyer.

good

I am a lawyer.

good

She is a lawyer.

good

This boss don’t gives any salary.

don’t+动词原型 gives去掉s
give sb.sth/ give sth. to sb.

This boss don’t give us any salary.

every month boss will give salary.

every 位于句首要大写首字母
every month指每个月,通常用于一般现在时
boss 可数名词 要加冠词或者所有格 the boss/ my boss
give sb.sth/ give sth. to sb.
salary 可数名词 a salary指每月的工资

Every month, my boss gives me a salary.

He uses the salary too fast.

good

People throw rag to ocean.

rag: countable noun

People throw rags to ocean.

rag bag can be reciacle.

rag bag 可数名词
句首单词首字母大写
reciacle 拼写错误, recycle: v. 这里可用它的形容词 recycled 可循环利用的

The rag bag can be recycled.

I love to use rag bag.

rag bag 可数名词 所以要变成复数形式

I love to use rag bags.

She loves olive color.

good,再不特殊强调,且没有误会的情景下,直接说 She loves olive 就可

Olive is a good color.

good

I have one olive color shirt.

这里olive作为形容词可以直接修饰shirt, 表示橄榄色的

I have one olive shirt.

This food is native.

good

I bring native plant to Franch.

plant is a countable noun, please add -s.
France 是名词法国。

I bring native plants to France.

I plant some native plant.

plant is a countable noun, please add -s.

I plant some native plants.

I learned Irish accent.

accent 作为口音来讲 一般是countable noun, 所以Irish accent前要加冠词,表特指强调。

I learned the Irish accent.

I go to the Irish.

Ireland n. 爱尔兰
Irish adj. 爱尔兰人的 爱尔兰语的
国家名词是专有名词,无需冠词

>I go to Ireland.

Some people think Irish are a good country.

Ireland n. 爱尔兰
Irish adj. 爱尔兰人的 爱尔兰语的
国家名词是专有名词,无需冠词
爱尔兰是一个国家,后面的be动词无需复数。

Some people think Ireland is a good country.

I’m surely of the topic.

off the topic 离题

I’m surely off the topic.

She is surely its safe.

adv.当然;无疑;必定 副词修饰形容词,动词,句子,但不可作为主句成分。
句子结构上 主语+be动词+表语,主句she is its safe肯定不对,可以改成 she is safe.
而加上副词surely用来修饰形容词,表强调肯定她是安全的。

She is surely safe.

We all surely we finshed our work

adv.当然;无疑;必定 副词修饰形容词,动词,句子,但不可作为主句成分。
finish有拼写错误
这个句子是一个从句结构,但也逃不开句子结构:sub+verb+object clause, we主语,宾语从句we finished our work,副词surely肯定不是verb, 所以句子缺少动词成分。句意为我们保证完成了我们的任务,动词可以选择guarantee, 前面是一般现在时,后面也通常保持时态一致的现在时,而已经完成了的动作,我们用现在完成时。

We guarantee we have finished our work