Lucas 20231215

S→subject
V→verb
O→object
n→noun

I(s) drink(v).

good

Daniel (s) jumps(v).

good

Mom(s) digs(v).

good

Babys(s) crawl(v).

good

Liam(s) dances(v).

good

The magic key(s) glowed(v).

good

We(s) had(v) a great time(o).

good

I(s) saw(v) Daniel(o) in the school.

good

I(s) ate(v) a carrot(o) yesterday.

good

Mark -12-16-2023-09:32

She is from Objibway.
He lives in Objibway.
I love Objibway.

good 虽然我不太知道Objibway在哪,但不妨碍你的句子的使用!

She pollutions water.
I will pollution the food.
We pollution earth.

1. pollution: uncountable noun.
air/water pollution 空气/水污染
The level of pollution in the river was falling.这条河中的污染物水平在下降。
它的动词形式: pollute
~ sth (by/with sth)(用某物)污染…
The river has been polluted with toxic waste from local factories.
它的形容词形式:polluted
the polluted river.被污染的河流

2.句子中不可用名词来做谓语动词成分:subject+v+object

She pollutes water.
I will pollute the food.
We pollute earth.

I have tears in my eyes.

good

His tears falls into a spoon.
Her tears falls out her eyes.

tears 本身就是复数形式 后面的动词无需改变-fall
fall out of… 从…掉下来

His tears fall into a spoon.
Her tears fall out of her eyes.

Chemical is danjuer.

chemical: countable noun
danjuer spelling mistake!
danger 是个名词,它的形容词:dangerous

Chemicals are dangerous.

I make chemicals.

good

He uses chemicals things.

chemical: 既可以是形容词也可以是可数名词。

He uses chemicals.名词
He uses chemical things.形容词

We have fire senses.
She only has 3 senses.
He breaks his 2 senses.

这里sense的用法很奇怪。
1. fire senses 这里指的是什么呢?
2. break 2 senses 也不会这么用, 如果我的某一个感官失灵,常用 lost my sense of …
例如:I completely lost my sense of taste and smell.

3.
sense:作名词讲, 它是个很灵活的单词,有很多含义。可译为“感官,意识,判断力, 意义”等等,但是要注意习惯搭配。
常见用法:
Dogs have a strong sense of smell. 狗的嗅觉很灵敏。
He felt a sense of loss.他感到失落。
a strong sense of duty 很强的责任感
He has a very good sense of direction.他的方向感很强。
There’s a lot of sense in what Mary says.玛丽说得很在理。
There’s no sense in worrying about it now.现在大可不必为那件事忧虑。
In a sense, it doesn’t matter any more.从某种意义上说,这事已无关紧要了。
This sentence doesn’t make sense.这个句子不通。

建议有关sense,重新再造,或者背诵例句

Essay by nina-12-15

Animals in the park

S→subject
V→verb
O→object
n→noun

When Grandpa(s) come(v)to visit(o)(noun), we (s)like(v)to go(o)for walk.
{Grandpa} is the third person singular, so add an -s at the end of {come}.
And we say {go for a walk}.
When Grandpa(s) comes(v)to visit(o), we (s)like(v)to go(o)for a walk.

First, we(s)go(v)to the store(o).
Ok!

Grandpa (s)buys(v)some seeds and nuts(o).
Ok!

Then we(s)go(v)to the park(o).
Ok!

Grandpa(s)shows(v)me(o/noun) how to feed the birds and squirrels.
Ok!

We(subject) give(verb) them seeds and nuts to eat. (noun) (to) (verb)

这句不太明白→Soon all the small animals come to me.
Soon(adv) all the small animals(s) come(v) to me.(o)

I (s)enjoy feeding them.→(noun)
Verb?

Doing is used as an object here.
I (s)enjoy(v) feeding them(o).

I(s)think(v)they(o/n)like seeds and nuts, and they (s)like(v)us(o/n)too.
There is a clause here.
I(s)think(v)(they like seeds and nuts)(clause of objective), and they (s)like(v)us(o/n)too.

Vocab by owen-12-14

Hastily (adv) 匆忙地
I hastily go to school.
I hastily finish my homework.
I hastily run to the station.

Good!

bin (n)
I hide in the bin.
The bin was big.
There were a big bin.

{A big bin} is singular, so we use {was} here.
There was a big bin.

Essay by owen-12-1

I hate mosquito.
{Mosquito} is a countable noun. You can say {a mosquito} or {mosquitos}.
I hate mosquitos.

There are mosquito at swamp.
The same problem mentioned above. Use {mosquitos} here.
And we always say {in swamp}.
There are mosquitos in swamp.

We riddance the mosquito away.
{Riddance} is a noun. You should use a verb here.
We drive the mosquito away.

protest (as a verb) is commonly used with preoposition ‘against’.
I protest against violence.
I protest against child abuse.

I protested I hate mosquito.
What you mean to say here is probably to complain:

I complain about mosquitoes.
I protest against mosquitoes

{Mosquito} is a countable noun. You can say {a mosquito} or {mosquitos}.
Also please keep the tense the same.
I protested that I hated mosquitos.

Mosquito drink blood.
The same problem mentioned before.
Mosquitos drink blood.

Mark -12-14-2023-11:13

I am panic.
He was panic.
My cat is panic.
They make panic.

good

We was panic.

we是我们,本身就是复数含义。 we +are/were…

We were panic.

Greek is a country.
He lives In Greek.
I live In Greek.

Greek:n.希腊人;希腊语 adj. 希腊的希腊人的
Greece:希腊
注意In 在句中 无需首字母大写!

Greece is a country.
He lives in Greece.
I live in Greece.

This house is ancient.
This knife is ancient.

good

Fight happen even in ancient.

fight 指战争战斗的时候 可数名词
ancient: 大多数是形容词, 作为名词是指古代人。 在古时候的词组:in ancient time

Fights happen even in ancient time.

He is a shepherd.
I am a shepherd.
They are shepherds.

good

I like flute.
He plays flute.
She bracks the flute.

flute: 可数名词
演奏长笛:play the flute. 乐器前一般都要有定冠词the, like: play the guitar/play the piano
bracks: spelling mistake

I like the flute.
He plays the flute.
She breaks the flute.

He has cool appearance.
I have cool appearance.
lion has cool appearance.

appearance:可数名词
lion 可数名词
位于句首的单词 首字母大写!

He has a cool appearance.
I have a cool appearance.
The lion has a cool appearance.

It was fearful.

good

I saw a fearful things.
It is fearfully.

1. fearful: be fearful of sth/that+clause./to do 因…而担忧害怕
举例:
Bankers were fearful of a world banking crisis。
Parents are ever fearful for their children.
We made a fearful mess of the room.
a fearful glance
2. a 不可与名词复数连用。
3. 它的副词: fearfully 副词不可直接位于be动词后。
be动词+形容词

I saw a fearful thing.
It is fearful.

This is the origin.

good

This are the waters origin.

1. This is…
These are…
2. 水的起源:the origin of water 一般无生命的物体要表示“…的”不接’s作为所有格,可以用… of…

This is the origin of water.

people origin here.

origin: n. 它的动词形式:originate

people originated here.

He is foolish.
My cat is foolish.
I’m foolish.

good

Vocab by owen-12-11

anxious (adj) 焦虑的
He is anxious.
After the test, I was anxious.
They are anxious.

Good!

strays (v) 偏离的
The original form of the word is {stray}.

Every time he write essay, He strays the topic.
{He} is the third person singular, so we add an -s at the end of {write}.
{Essay} is a countable noun, so please use an article here.
And the letter {H} should be capitalized here.
Every time he writes an essay, he strays the topic.

I strays the destination.
{I} is the first person singular, so the verb should be in the original form.
I stray the destination.

They strays where they are ???
{They} is the third person plural, so the verb should be in the original form.
And watch your handwriting.
They stray where they are.

Essay by owen-12-09

The wolf tore the beef into half.
Good!

The wolf ranted to me.
Good!

The wolf scowled at me.
Good!

The wolf riddance me away.
{Riddance} is a noun. You can use {expel} here.
The wolf expelled me away.

The wolf like to eat lambs.
{The wolf} is the third person singular, so you need to add an -s at the end of the verb.
The wolf like to eat lambs.

Mark -12-13-2023-09:53

I have average foods.
We don’t get average homeworks.
Teacher give average book to us.

1. 总体来说,用法都比较奇怪。
average 虽然也有ordinary; not special的意思,但习惯用法搭配如下,like:
I was just an average sort of student 我就是个一般的学生
I am average. 我很一般
I scored very average on my math test.成绩一般
The average price is two rmbs 平均价格
The food is average. 食物很一般。
The book is just average.这本书很一般。
an average rate/cost/price 平均费率 / 成本 / 价格
The average adult man 普通成年男子

2. homework: uncountable noun
teacher 第三人称单数 ,动词加s
average book:【经】(银行的)帐面平均存款余额
book: 可数名词

I have average foods.
We don’t get standard/typical homework
The teacher gives ordinary/unexceptional books to us.

I have a pair of shoes.
I have a pair sock.
I got a pair of colored shirt.

1. pair: 可数名词
常用固定词组 a pair of…
a pair of gloves/shoes/earrings
一副手套、一双鞋、一对耳环
a pair of trousers/pants/jeans
一条长裤、裤子、牛仔裤等

2. shooce 拼写错误
一样的颜色的shirt 一对相同颜色的衬衫也就是两件一样颜色的衬衫,一般衬衫不论“对儿”。
shoe, sock, shirt都是可数名词

I have a pair of shoes.
I have a pair of socks.
I got two shirts in the same color.

He is donations.
People donations to pore people.
Donations’ a good things.

1. donation: n 赠送;捐赠物 它为名词哦! 它的动词是: donate
2. pore拼写错误
donations 后面的系动词要用are

He makes large donations.
People donate to poor people.
Donations are good things.

consider:(尤指为作出决定而)仔细考虑,细想
认为…;顾及体谅;注视

She considered her options.
We’re considering buying a new car.
This award is considered (to be) a great honour.这项奖被视为极大的荣誉。
You should consider other people before you act.你在行动之前应当考虑到别人。
He stood there, considering the painting.他站在那里,凝视着那幅画。

I consider things.

good

People need consider every time.

need to do sth.
consider是及物动词后面要接宾语

People need to consider it every time.

We are consider now.

be+Ving 表示正在进行的动作 are considering 正在思考; be watching TV 正在看电视

We are considering it now.

receive: verb!
receive sth 得到某物
receive sth.from sb. 从某人某处得到某物
receive a letter/present/phone call收到信 / 礼物;接到电话
receive information/payment/thanks接收信息 / 付款;受到感谢
We received a warm welcome from our hosts.

I received my toy.

good

My cat received her food.

good

He receiveds his shoes.

receive是原型
received是它的过去式
receives是它的第三人称单数

He receiveds his shoes.

Mark -12-13-2023-09:54

I know the basic word.

good

He knows the basic work.

good

We know all the basic actions.

good

We had charity shop.

charity shop: countable noun

We had charity shops.

I give money to charity school.

charity school: countable noun

I give money to charity schools.

No body charity to the pure city.

no body:主语 nobody连在一起的 nobody=no one 后面接动词是用第三人称单数形式
charity: n
to the pure city: 不定式表目的地
这个句子里没有动词,所以缺少谓语动词成分。 可以用donate money 捐款。
poor city 拼写错误

Nobody donates money to the poor city.