Author: Ray Shall

I throw my blue, small pencil at him.

blue,small 都是coordinate adjectives, 当adj. 修饰名词的时候，一般顺序为：大小+颜色+n

I throw my small， blue pencil at him.

We turn into 3 monstors.

monsters.

They cook cookies for the party.

good

She walks down the stier.

stair 注意拼写， 同时它是个可数名词。

stairs

I attend my friend’s birthday party.

good

He works slow, but he’s work is bad.

but 表示转折，slow和bad都是形容不好的事物，不需要转折，用and即可
he的所有格是his

He works slow, and his work is bad.

Farmer’s chicken runs out the farm.

run out 表示耗尽用尽 为不及物动词词组
run out of 为及物动词 +地点 表示跑出哪里

Farmer’s chicken runs out of the farm.

My cat chiesses me at living room.

spelling mistake
living room is a countable noun, please add {the} before it.

My cat chases me at the living room.

We play soccer together.

good!

I finsh my long, big, boring homework.

finsh:spelling mistake
long, big, boring homework:修饰作业，一般不用long and big, 一般用heavy

I finish my boring, heavy homework.

I trained ever month.

1. ever 在这里spelling mistake，should be every
2.「train」can be both n and verb.
as a noun, 作为一种交通工具时，常见用法有：
to get on/off a train
I go to SZ by train.
as a verb, train-trained（过去时）trains（第三人称单数形式）
可及物也可不及物，常见表达：
sb. train sth. 锻炼，培养(某一素质或能力)
train sb. to do sth.训练某人去做某事
train for sth.为某项活动或赛事去训练

I trained （for the race）every month.

I zipped my bag.

good

A white cat jump around In my house.

{A white cat} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of verb.
句中的{In}, pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

A white cat jumps around in my house.

My tall dad hug me.

{My tall dad} is the third person singular

My tall dad hugs me.

I throw two eggs at my mom.

good

She odmire black dogs.

spelling mistake! pay attention to the verb {admire}
{she} is the third person singular
admire它表示一种欣赏，欣赏好的品质，崇拜英雄或者正在欣赏一处风景，观赏者某事物。

She is admiring black dogs.

We attend our teacher party.

在这里，老师的party，是对party表示所属关系，英语名词的所有格表示所属关系。我们在可数名词party前要加所属格，表示“…的…”，常用的人称表示所属格的有my, your, his, her, their。还有其他名词，一般情况包括单数名词和不带词尾 s 的复数名词，加 ‘s：teacher’s party, Jack’s book

We attend our teacher’s party.

He turn into a elire.

{he} is the third person singular
elire 注意拼写
elite 前面要用 an elite

He turns into an elite.

His green bird shoute at me.

shoute 注意拼写
{His green bird} is the third person singular

His green bird shouts at me.

They overlap the papers.

good

He learn fast, but he write bad.

{he} is the third person singular

He learns fast, but he writes bad.

I read slow, but I know the book.

good

She throw a ball at her coach.

{she} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of {throw}

She throws a ball at her coach.

He turns into a ball.

good

I chersh my dog.

spelling mistake!

cherish

I write slow, but I write good.

good

We odmire school.

spelling mistake! pay attention to the verb {admire}
{school} is a countable noun.

We admire my school.

She turn down him.

{she} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of {turn}
短语 turn dowm 的结构是一个动词+副词构成的词组，代词作宾语必须放中间，him在这里就是代词宾格，所以要放中间。如果是个名词，名词可以放在中间也可以放在后面，但通常放后面。
turn the TV on
turn on the TV

turn it off
turn it on

She turns him down.

We despise bad dog.

{dog} is a countable noun.

We despise the bad dog.

They attend his birthday party.

good

I contempt practice ukualele.

spelling mistake for {ukulele}
ukulele是一个乐器，乐器之前要有冠词
{contempt} is a noun. We can say {show/feel a contempt for sth}.

I feel contempt for practicing the ukulele.

They jump high, but they jop low.

spelling mistake for job, 应该是hop, 对吧？

They jump high， but they hop low.

There is a humid jungle.

good

A turtle lives in it.

good

His name is Jack.

good, 指代物品或者动物的“它”，我们通常用「it」，但是如果在一个故事里有一些拟人的形象，我们用「he」也可以哦！

He has a green body and hard shell.

这里「and」后面的 hard shell 缺少冠词。
英语中「and」连接的并列成分是否可以共用一个冠词「a」或者「the」，有一些常见用法：
1. 若表示由两部分或两种身份组成的一个事物或人，则第二个名词前不用冠词；但如果是表示两样事物或两个人，则两个名词前都要用冠词。
a black and white cat 一只黑白相间的猫
a black and a white cat 一只黑猫和一只白猫

a worker and writer 一位工人兼作家的人
a worker and a writer 一个工人和一个作家

2. 两个名词是成套的物品，两个合用一个冠词。如果两个名词都有冠词，则表示意思分开。
a horse and cart 一辆马车
a horse and a cart 一匹马和一辆车

a knife and fork 一副刀叉
a knife and a fork 一把刀和一把叉

he has a green body and a hard shell

He also has four short feet and a short tail.

good

I cherish my old percle.

{percle}明显spelling mistake, 是要用哪一个单词？

She attends my birthday party.

good！

He has eaten worms for his whole life.

{for his whole life}在语法里, 是可以的，但更常用的方式是将句子里的{for}省略。
这里解释一下句子结构：
无for：句子结构为 subject主语+ predicate verb谓语动词+object宾语 +the whole life （这里它是副词短语作为complement 去modify verb补充说明动作）。
有for：for➕时间段 为介词短语作为时间状语来解释说明句子实现。

He has eaten worms (for) his whole life.

He runs slow, but he jump high.

{he}-第三人称单数哦！后面的jump要加-s.

He runs slow, but he jumps high.

I turn into a pig.

good! 句子含义是如果吧pig换成更棒的就更好了.

We despise cars and airplane.

{airplane} countable noun.

We despise cars and airplanes.

They admire cow.

1. admire还是和昨天的作业一样，它表示一种欣赏，欣赏好的品质，崇拜英雄或者正在欣赏一处风景，欣赏着自己的一台车。
2. {cow} countable noun.

They are admiring a cow.

He runs to the concert.

good!

My cat ate like a cow.

{ate}这里的是想用act like来表达行为举止像 a cow吗？

My cat acts like a cow.

She contempts making food.

本句缺少动词，而{contempt}作为名词 无法充当谓语动词使用。在这里可以使用feel/show contempt for sth.

She shows/feels contempt for making food.

They contempt computer work.

本句缺少动词，而{contempt}作为名词 无法充当谓语动词使用。在这里可以使用feel contempt for sth.

They feel contempt for computer work.

I turn right to park.

{park}为普通可数名词，通常要有a/the冠词连用。

I turn right to the park.

She has learned writing for 20 years

good！

We cut the potatos.

名词变成复数的时候，有一些特殊情况-es
例如：
tomato－tomatoes
potato－potatoes
hero－heroes

potatoes

He attends his school a feld trip.

1. {attend school} 为固定搭配。同第一句解析。
2. {a feld trip} should be {field trip}, please watch out your spelling.
3. {attend school}与{a filed trip}之间可以改成： a school field trip;

He attends a school field trip.

Her humstar runs around inside a ball.

hamster

They dispise thers school.

要注意拼写错误{dispise} {thers}。

They despise their school.

She runs slow, but she was smart.

1. {runs}和{was}，前后时态不一致，runs是现在时，was是be动词「am /is/ are」的过去式，需要统一时态。描述客观现状，一般现在时就可以。

She runs slow, but she is smart.

His mom turn into a aligeter.

1. {aligeter}should be{alligator}, 这个名词前加不定冠词的时候，要用an. 同样类型的单词还有: an apple; an egg.
2. {His mom} is the third person singular, please add -s at the end of {turn}

His mom turns into an alligator.

He learns slow, but he runs fast.

good！

She need to attends a school。

1. { She } is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {need}.
2. 注意固定用法：need to do sth. 表示需要去做某事。 to do 在句子中 后面要接动词的原型 {to attend}.
3. 注意固定搭配：attend school，这里 attend=go to, 中间无需加冠词。类似的还有attend church.
4. {。}英文的句号是{.}

She needs to attend school.

We has eaten egg for 20 years.

1. {We}-plural form, so please use {have}.
2. {egg}-可数名词，please add -s.

We have eaten eggs for 20 years.

I admire cat because it cute。

1. {cat}-可数名词，please add -s.
2. {because}作为连词连接两个完整的句子, 其后面的{it cute}并不是个完整的句子，它有主语I,也有表语形容词cute，但缺少系动词。同时主语it代指前面的cats, 是一个plural form, 所以要把it变成they。
3. {admire sth.} to look at sth and think that it is attractive and/or impressive.
表达欣赏赞美的眼光来观赏某物。
如：I am admiring my new car.
Let’s just sit and admire the view.
而句子中表达的是一种对事物的喜爱，所以我们可以使用如下用法。

I like cats because they are cute.
I love cats because they are cute.
I adore cats because they are cute.
I am fond of cats because they are cute.

They walk into the house.

good!

He turns into a monstor.

monster

I cherish my new shoes.

good!

My dog bite my paper.

{bite}- 已经结束的动作用过去时。
bite-bit

My dog bit my paper.

I turn down his permassion.

permission

She have readen book for 2 years.

1. {She}-the third person singular, please use {has}.
2. {read} 词形变化为现在时read， 过去时red, 过去分词即用于have/has done结构中时为red. please remember:read-red-red
3. {book}-countable noun. please use plural form.

She has red books for 2 years.

They saw a bird outside the window.

good!