A white cat jump around In my house.

{A white cat} is the third person singular, we should add -s at the end of verb.
句中的{In}, pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

A white cat jumps around in my house.

My tall dad hug me.

{My tall dad} is the third person singular

My tall dad hugs me.

I throw two eggs at my mom.

good

She odmire black dogs.

spelling mistake! pay attention to the verb {admire}
{she} is the third person singular
admire它表示一种欣赏，欣赏好的品质，崇拜英雄或者正在欣赏一处风景，观赏者某事物。

She is admiring black dogs.

We attend our teacher party.

在这里，老师的party，是对party表示所属关系，英语名词的所有格表示所属关系。我们在可数名词party前要加所属格，表示“…的…”，常用的人称表示所属格的有my, your, his, her, their。还有其他名词，一般情况包括单数名词和不带词尾 s 的复数名词，加 ‘s：teacher’s party, Jack’s book

We attend our teacher’s party.

He turn into a elire.

{he} is the third person singular
elire 注意拼写
elite 前面要用 an elite

He turns into an elite.

His green bird shoute at me.

shoute 注意拼写
{His green bird} is the third person singular

His green bird shouts at me.

They overlap the papers.

good

He learn fast, but he write bad.

{he} is the third person singular

He learns fast, but he writes bad.

I read slow, but I know the book.

good