She need to attends a school。
1. { She } is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {need}.
2. 注意固定用法：need to do sth. 表示需要去做某事。 to do 在句子中
3. 注意固定搭配：attend school，这里 attend=go to, 中间无需加冠词。类似的还有attend church.
4. {。}英文的句号是{.}
She needs to attend school.
We has eaten egg for 20 years.
1. {We}-plural form, so please use {have}.
2. {egg}-可数名词，please add -s.
We have eaten eggs for 20 years.
I admire cat because it cute。
1. {cat}-可数名词，please add -s.
2. {because}作为连词连接两个完整的句子, 其后面的{it cute}并不是个完整的句子，它有主语I,也有表语形容词cute，但缺少系动词。同时主语it代指前面的cats, 是一个plural form, 所以要把it变成they。
3. {admire sth.} to look at sth and think that it is attractive and/or impressive.
表达欣赏赞美的眼光来观赏某物。
如：I am admiring my new car.
Let’s just sit and admire the view.
而句子中表达的是一种对事物的喜爱，所以我们可以使用如下用法。
I like cats because they are cute.
I love cats because they are cute.
I adore cats because they are cute.
I am fond of cats because they are cute.
They walk into the house.
good!
He turns into a monstor.
monster
I cherish my new shoes.
good!
My dog bite my paper.
{bite}- 已经结束的动作用过去时。
bite-bit
My dog bit my paper.
I turn down his permassion.
permission
She have readen book for 2 years.
1. {She}-the third person singular, please use {has}.
2. {read} 词形变化为现在时read， 过去时red, 过去分词即用于have/has done结构中时为red. please remember:read-red-red
3. {book}-countable noun. please use plural form.
She has red books for 2 years.
They saw a bird outside the window.
good!