Alice dances every day.

OK!

Alice likes dance ballet.

We should say {like doing}.

Alice likes dancing ballet.

Alice feels tired practice dance.

We should say {be tired doing} and {practice doing}.

Alice feels tired practicing dancing.

Alice feels happy dance ballet.

We should say {be/feel happy doing}.

Alice feels happy dancing ballet.

Alice practices Turn out, she feels hard.

We need to use {and/but} to connect two simple sentences.

Alice practices Turn out, and she feels hard.

Turn out is a ballet movement.

OK!

Turn out is a ballet terminology

OK!

Alice practices day and day.

OK!

She becomes strong.

OK!

She runs fast.

OK!

She keeps training/ train.

OK!

she finishes training.

OK!

She looks tried.

Watch your spelling: {tired}.
I believe you can distinguish {tired} and {tried}.

She looks tried.

Alice says goodbye with teacher.

We should say {say goodbye to sb.}.
Also，add an article before {teacher}.

Alice says goodbye to a/the teacher.

She went to home have shower.

We should say {have a shower}.

The infinitive {to do} represents the purpose.

She went to home to have a shower.

She lays on sofa.

She lays on a sofa.

Alice sleeps.

OK!