Essay by Owen-11-13

Long ago, there were three pig.

Three little pigs need to use the plural:{ there were three pigs }

Long ago, there were three pigs.

The biggest on biled a house made by straw.

Watch your spelling! Make sure you use bing.com to double check your spelling.

The biggest one built a house made by straw.

The second biggest pig made a house by stack.

OK!

The smallest pig made a house use by brick.

Delete {use}. It is extra here.

The smallest pig made a house by brick.

One day a wolf came to were the pig’s live.

Watch your spelling! I believe it should be {where three little pigs lived}.

One day a wolf came to where the pigs lived.

The wolf blow the biggest pig’s house.

Use the past tense {blew}.

The wolf blew the biggest pig’s house.

his house fall apart.

The first letter at the beginning of each sentence should be capitalized.
Also use the past tense {fell}.

His house fell apart.

The biggest ran to the second biggest pig’s.

You can use ellipsis like you do, or you can write it completely.

The biggest pig ran to the second biggest pig’s house.

The wolf blow apart the pig’s.

Use the past tense {blew}.
Also make sure you fully express your meaning.

The wolf blew apart the second biggest pig’s house.

The two pig ran to the smallest pig’s house.

Use the plural:{ The two pigs }

The two pigs ran to the smallest pig’s house.

The wolf blow very hard but the house is not apart, so the wolf ran away.

Use the past tense {blew} {was}.

The wolf blew very hard, but the house was not apart, so the wolf ran away.

Vocab by Owen-11-09

I ate banana.
I played baseball.
I had played baseball before I eaten banana.

{Banana} is a singular countable noun. We should add an article {a} before it.
We need to use the past tense instead of the past participle in the clause after {before}.

I ate a banana.
I played baseball.
I had played baseball before I ate a banana.

I ate snack.
I drank milk.
I had eaten snack before I drunk milk.

I had eaten a few snacks before I drank milk.

I played video game.
I drank cola.
I had played video game before I drunk cola.

{Video game} needs to be in the plural {video games}.

I played video games.
I drank cola.
I had played video games before I drank cola.

I ate apple.
I drank soap.
I had eaten apple before I drank soup.

{Apple} is a singular countable noun. We should add an article {an} before it.

I ate an apple.
I drank soap.
I had eaten an apple before I drank soup.

I read comic
I played frisbee.
I had read comic before I played frisbee.

I read a comic
I played frisbee.
I had read a comic before I played frisbee.

Mark-11-22-2023-08:54

feld

field

we eat hunburger.

We eat a hamburger

She cherishs games.

She cherishes her games.

A rabbit jump.

A rabbit jump(s).

I contempt works.

contempt 不能用着像动词。

I look at work with contempt.

He plays game.

game 是能数的名词。

He plays a game.

We draw to the classroom.

We draw in the classroom.

Vocab by Owen-11-14

protested(v)抗议
They protested at the goverment.
I protested to have homework.
Students protested to have test.

The spelling {government}.
{Test} is a countable noun with an article added.

We ‘protest against’ something:

They protested against the government.
Students protested against the test.

hammock(n)吊床
I sleep on a hammock.
The hammock is green.

Good!

Vocab by Owen-11-14

The hommock endure 100kg.

{Hommock} is the third person singular.

The hommock endures 100kg.

guarantee(n保证)
I guarantee I would not sleep.
She guarantee that she would not play
They guarantee that they will not play soccer after lunch.

She guaranteed/guarantees that she would not play.

Vocab by Owen-11-15

Play video games.
Do you want to eat pizza or pasta
you go to sleep or ran laps
Do you want snacks or drinks.
He is smart but fat.
She is bad but rich.
He is tall but dumb.
She is fat but nice.
He is strong but poor.
They were fat but strong

Use question marks when asking questions.

Do you want to sail a boat or play video games?
Do you want to eat pizza or pasta?
Do you go to sleep or ran laps?
Do you want snacks or drinks?

Vocab by Owen-11-15

I like pizza and bugar.
I hate school and homework.
I like watermelon and apple.
I like cola and fanta.
I love to eat and play.
I love video games and TV.
Do you want water or milk.
you go to sleep or do homework
Do you want to sail boat or…?

The spelling {burger}.

I like pizza and burger.

Fanta is a proper noun whose first letter should be capitalized.

I like cola and Fanta.

Be careful and use question marks when asking questions.

Do you want water or milk?
Do you go to sleep or do homework?

{Boat} is a countable noun with an article added.

Do you want to sail a boat or…?

Vocab by Owen-11-16

banter(vi)开玩笑

He bantered with us.

vessel (n)容器
The vessel was big.
The vessel is made by metal
The water is in the vessel.

Good!

wily(adj)狡猾的
That is a wily fax
He is very wily.
There are many wily fox.

The plural of {fox} is {foxes}.

There are many wily foxes.

gally(V)恐吓
He gally me.
They love to gally people.
I hate people gally me.

Hate sb. to do sth.

He gallies me.
I hate people who gally me.

{He} is the third person singular. You can choose to use the simple present tense, the third person singular, or the simple past tense.

He gallied/gallies me.

owen-11-21-2023-10:47

Capitalize the first letter of first word only, and proper nouns (names of people, places, or things).

For example:

I (first letter of first word) bought a Tesla (the car has a name, so we must capitalize it) for Owen (person has a name, so we must capitalize).

(first letter of first word) Let’s visit Shenzhen Talent Park.

Shenzhen Talent Park is the name of a park in Shenzhen. We must capitalize.

Surely, It is late

Surely, it is late.

Surely, we will be happy.

Surely, he is tall.

Remember to use an for words that start with a vowel:

There’s an automatic toy.

If you need to use ‘many’, add ‘s’ behind the nouns.

There are many automatic things.