Three Little Pigs
1) conjunctions (fanboy)
2) more adjectives
3) All description. No dialogue. No telling.
There were three toddle pigs live happily on a broad plain. After they were old enough, they decided to build their own house in this temperate spring.
The eldest brother casually saw some straws lying on the ground. He was very
lazy. Building his house was extremely hard for him. He has never finished anything in his life, but he was the master of sleeping. He slowly dragged the straws together, and comfortablely lied down on the straw under the glorious sun.
The two brothers went forward together, and as they walked, they saw a pile of wood in front of them. The yougher brother loved collecting woods. They are strong and beautiful, and their smell is refreshing. He used those wood to build his dream house.
The third pig was hardworking. He relocated the heavy bricks. The tenacious pig stacked them up together. They become a sturdy fortress，withstanding the blowing wind.
A starving wolf came. He is a skeleton. He hasn’t eaten anything for three days.
He saw a plump pig lied deliciously on the straws. His eyes glow golden. When the wolf was going to succeed, the lazy pig unexpectedly woke up. He froze when he saw the wolf. Then, he ran insanely for once in his entire life.
He rushed in his brother’s beautiful wood house. The wolf demanded them to open the door. They did not do the thing that only the idiot does, so the wolf inhales the air extremely hard and blow at the house. The wooden masterpiece disappears.
They ran into the strong fortress they brther made. The wolf tried to blow the brick house, but the brick house was as hard as a diamond. The wolf did not give up. He went into the chimney. Sadly, the fire was on, so the wolf died painfully.