1

First of all,

Sentence 1: It hasn’t even been a year √

since (conjunction) √

Sentence 2: we’ve debuted –> We have debuted. (error)

or

• de·but [dāˈbyo͞o]
• debut (noun) – a person’s first appearance or performance in a particular capacity or role
• debut (verb) – perform in public for the first time

  past participle – Debuted (de bu ‘d)

or, since ‘our debut’

for vs from

for – 4
from – frum

We always appreciate you guys’ support.

We always appreciate your undying support.

Our family and our members….

We appreciate our family and cast members

We appreciate our family members and supporters

2

I have forgotten all of my english. (present perfect)

My English (3rd singular) has become rusty. (present perfect)

I (subj) started (verb) learning (noun) English (object complement) when I was seven years old.

I (subj) began (verb) learning (noun) English (object complement) in kindergarten.

3

[√] Hearing all your enthusiastic cheers, I once again realize how powerful music is.

[X] Tonight, here in Poppia, we’ll be able to [see ourselves going beyond everything] with the power of music.

Here in Poppia, we’ll celebrate the night with the power of music.
Tonight in Poppia, let’s celebrate life with the power of music.
Tonight in Poppia, let’s remember this event with the power of music.

[X] We open our door(s) with KCON’s signature song “Poppia” which [was performed, past tense] by WayV.

We kick off with KCON’s signature song “Poppia”, which will be performed by WayV

[X] And we also prepared Gen-Z Pop Special Stage, ..where..against the powers of Kpop’s (representive, wrong)

represent [verb]
representing [noun]
OR
representative [noun/adj] girl groups, and KCON’s exclusive collaboration performances.

[√] And dream stage the artist KCON created together is also waiting for you.

[√] I will also be under dream stage, so please look forward to it.