Mark-11-22-2023-08:54

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we eat hunburger.

We eat a hamburger

She cherishs games.

She cherishes her games.

A rabbit jump.

A rabbit jump(s).

I contempt works.

contempt 不能用着像动词。

I look at work with contempt.

He plays game.

game 是能数的名词。

He plays a game.

We draw to the classroom.

We draw in the classroom.

Vocab by Owen-11-14

protested(v)抗议
They protested at the goverment.
I protested to have homework.
Students protested to have test.

The spelling {government}.
{Test} is a countable noun with an article added.

We ‘protest against’ something:

They protested against the government.
Students protested against the test.

hammock(n)吊床
I sleep on a hammock.
The hammock is green.

Good!

Vocab by Owen-11-14

The hommock endure 100kg.

{Hommock} is the third person singular.

The hommock endures 100kg.

guarantee(n保证)
I guarantee I would not sleep.
She guarantee that she would not play
They guarantee that they will not play soccer after lunch.

She guaranteed/guarantees that she would not play.

Vocab by Owen-11-15

Play video games.
Do you want to eat pizza or pasta
you go to sleep or ran laps
Do you want snacks or drinks.
He is smart but fat.
She is bad but rich.
He is tall but dumb.
She is fat but nice.
He is strong but poor.
They were fat but strong

Use question marks when asking questions.

Do you want to sail a boat or play video games?
Do you want to eat pizza or pasta?
Do you go to sleep or ran laps?
Do you want snacks or drinks?

Vocab by Owen-11-15

I like pizza and bugar.
I hate school and homework.
I like watermelon and apple.
I like cola and fanta.
I love to eat and play.
I love video games and TV.
Do you want water or milk.
you go to sleep or do homework
Do you want to sail boat or…?

The spelling {burger}.

I like pizza and burger.

Fanta is a proper noun whose first letter should be capitalized.

I like cola and Fanta.

Be careful and use question marks when asking questions.

Do you want water or milk?
Do you go to sleep or do homework?

{Boat} is a countable noun with an article added.

Do you want to sail a boat or…?

Vocab by Owen-11-16

banter(vi)开玩笑

He bantered with us.

vessel (n)容器
The vessel was big.
The vessel is made by metal
The water is in the vessel.

Good!

wily(adj)狡猾的
That is a wily fax
He is very wily.
There are many wily fox.

The plural of {fox} is {foxes}.

There are many wily foxes.

gally(V)恐吓
He gally me.
They love to gally people.
I hate people gally me.

Hate sb. to do sth.

He gallies me.
I hate people who gally me.

{He} is the third person singular. You can choose to use the simple present tense, the third person singular, or the simple past tense.

He gallied/gallies me.

owen-11-21-2023-10:47

Capitalize the first letter of first word only, and proper nouns (names of people, places, or things).

For example:

I (first letter of first word) bought a Tesla (the car has a name, so we must capitalize it) for Owen (person has a name, so we must capitalize).

(first letter of first word) Let’s visit Shenzhen Talent Park.

Shenzhen Talent Park is the name of a park in Shenzhen. We must capitalize.

Surely, It is late

Surely, it is late.

Surely, we will be happy.

Surely, he is tall.

Remember to use an for words that start with a vowel:

There’s an automatic toy.

If you need to use ‘many’, add ‘s’ behind the nouns.

There are many automatic things.

jayden-11-21-2023-08:56

Red brings food to visit her grandmother

You can’t say you bring food [to visit]. The food is NOT for the verb visit.
The food is FOR her grandmother.

Red brings food to her grandmother.
Red brings food and visits her grandmother.

A hungry wolf comes.

时间到了,我们要学点更好的单词表达行为哈。

A hungry wolf arrives
A starving wolf arrives ominously.

His saliva is a long river. haha is ok

He decides to wait at her grandmother’s house.

Remember to describe. Answer why. Stretch situation out into small details, and use conjunctions to connect them.

He (subj) decides (verb) [to set] a trap for Red

to set is an infinitive that turns ‘to set’ into a noun.
“a trap for Red” is a object complement.

conjunction ‘and’
[He] waits at her grandmother’s house.

Since we use and, we can carry over the subject.

He decides to set a trap for Red and waits at her grandmother’s house.

He arrives

Try to use more adverbs to describe your verbs.

He meticulously arrives

He sees an old woman lying on the bed. Good!

He eats the “appetizer”.

Let’s describe more and try to connect it.

The wolf sees the old woman as an appetizer.
The wolf devours her in one gulp
use ‘and’ conjunction.

The wolf sees the old woman as an appetizer, and devours her in one gulp.

When Red arrives, she sees her “grandmother” lying on the bed.

Let’s try to be more descriptive. Don’t use quotes to have the audience guess what you are meaning.

When Red arrives, she sees a big hulking figure lying on the bed.

It does not look like her grandmother at all!

It is the wolf actually.

Let’s not use actually. That word is used too much among Chinese students.

In fact, is it the wolf in disguise.

The wolf eats his “main course”

Jump, spring, hop, leap…各种各样的jump synonym 都可以用。

He leaps into the air.
In a gruesome scene, Red becomes his main course.

等于:

He leaps into the air, and in a gruesome scene, Red becomes his main course.

Vocab by Mark-11-18

He contempts the work.

Contempt is a noun. We can say {show a contempt for sth.}

He shows contempt for the work.

I jump on the table.

Good!

They despise to eat hamburger.

despise 套现/很不喜欢 (动词)

They despise hamburgers.

I run around in my house.

Good!

A dog barks at me.

Good!

We cook some cookies.

We always say {make some cookies}.

We make some cookies.

A chicken runs to farmer.
{Farmer} is a countable noun. You should say {a/the farmer}.

A chicken runs to a farmer.

We admire cars.

She cherish her cat.

{She} is the third person singular, so please add {-es}.
第三人称单数作主语,其后动词以-s/-x/-sh/-ch结尾,要加es.

She cherishes her cat.

We jog to our home.

Good!