Essay by owen-11-28

Fox are wily.

The plural form of {fox} is to add -es because {fox} is ended with -x.

Foxes are wily.

Fox are also vile.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes are also vile.

Fox like to creep in grass.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes like to creep in the grass.

Fox like to eat pork.

The same problem mentioned above.

Foxes like to eat pork.

Vocab by owen-11-27

eyesight (n) 视力
His eyesight was bad.
There eyesight were bad.

You mean {their}? Please distinguish {their} and {there}.
Also {eyesight} is uncountable, so we use third person singular here.

Their eyesight was bad.

They have bad eyesight.

Good!

Vocab by douglas-11-26

Vocab by douglas-11-26
The cat was pating cat food.

{Pat} is a consonant-vowel-consonant structure that needs to be double written with -t followed by -ing.

The cat was patting cat food.

He was reading a book.
The cats were playing.

I had drunk some water.
He had eaten a burger.
She had seen a cat.

I had been watching this video.
It had been drinking corrosive liquid.
He had been reading.

I ate food.
I saw him.
I wanted it.

cupboard noun
a piece of furniture or a space for storing things with a ? or doors and usually with shelves

Pay attention to your handwriting. OK?

It is a the cupboard.

Two articles?

It is a cupboard.

We need a new cupboard.
I want to buy a cupboard.

orchestra noun
a large group of musicians who play many different instruments together and are led by a conductor

The orchestra played badly.
The orchestra is not performing.
Who is this orchestra’s conductor?

jig noun
an energetic traditional dance of Great Britain and Ireland or the music that is played for such a dance

He is playing jig.
He loves jig.
I hate jig very much!

cavern a large cave
He lives in a cavern.
It went into the cavern.
There are many animals in this cavern.

The dog was playing it.
He was eat some disgusting food.

The present continuous tense:the form of the verb should be {be doing}

He was eating some disgusting food.

They were playing basketball.

Mark -11-27-2023-10:17

I cherish my old percle.

{percle}明显spelling mistake, 是要用哪一个单词?

She attends my birthday party.

good!

He has eaten worms for his whole life.

{for his whole life}在语法里, 是可以的,但更常用的方式是将句子里的{for}省略。
这里解释一下句子结构:
无for:句子结构为 subject主语+ predicate verb谓语动词+object宾语 +the whole life (这里它是副词短语作为complement 去modify verb补充说明动作)。
有for:for➕时间段 为介词短语作为时间状语来解释说明句子实现。

He has eaten worms (for) his whole life.

He runs slow, but he jump high.

{he}-第三人称单数哦!后面的jump要加-s.

He runs slow, but he jumps high.

I turn into a pig.

good! 句子含义是如果吧pig换成更棒的就更好了.

We despise cars and airplane.

{airplane} countable noun.

We despise cars and airplanes.

They admire cow.

1. admire还是和昨天的作业一样,它表示一种欣赏,欣赏好的品质,崇拜英雄或者正在欣赏一处风景,欣赏着自己的一台车。
2. {cow} countable noun.

They are admiring a cow.

He runs to the concert.

good!

My cat ate like a cow.

{ate}这里的是想用act like来表达行为举止像 a cow吗?

My cat acts like a cow.

She contempts making food.

本句缺少动词,而{contempt}作为名词 无法充当谓语动词使用。在这里可以使用feel/show contempt for sth.

She shows/feels contempt for making food.

Mark -11-26-2023-10:40-2

They contempt computer work.

本句缺少动词,而{contempt}作为名词 无法充当谓语动词使用。在这里可以使用feel contempt for sth.

They feel contempt for computer work.

I turn right to park.

{park}为普通可数名词,通常要有a/the冠词连用。

I turn right to the park.

She has learned writing for 20 years

good!

We cut the potatos.

名词变成复数的时候,有一些特殊情况-es
例如:
tomato-tomatoes
potato-potatoes
hero-heroes

potatoes

He attends his school a feld trip.

1. {attend school} 为固定搭配。同第一句解析。
2. {a feld trip} should be {field trip}, please watch out your spelling.
3. {attend school}与{a filed trip}之间可以改成: a school field trip;

He attends a school field trip.

Her humstar runs around inside a ball.

hamster

They dispise thers school.

要注意拼写错误{dispise} {thers}。

They despise their school.

She runs slow, but she was smart.

1. {runs}和{was},前后时态不一致,runs是现在时,was是be动词「am /is/ are」的过去式,需要统一时态。描述客观现状,一般现在时就可以。

She runs slow, but she is smart.

His mom turn into a aligeter.

1. {aligeter}should be{alligator}, 这个名词前加不定冠词的时候,要用an. 同样类型的单词还有: an apple; an egg.
2. {His mom} is the third person singular, please add -s at the end of {turn}

His mom turns into an alligator.

He learns slow, but he runs fast.

good!

Mark -11-26-2023-10:40

She need to attends a school。

1. { She } is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {need}.
2. 注意固定用法:need to do sth. 表示需要去做某事。 to do 在句子中 后面要接动词的原型 {to attend}.
3. 注意固定搭配:attend school,这里 attend=go to, 中间无需加冠词。类似的还有attend church.
4. {。}英文的句号是{.}

She needs to attend school.

We has eaten egg for 20 years.

1. {We}-plural form, so please use {have}.
2. {egg}-可数名词,please add -s.

We have eaten eggs for 20 years.

I admire cat because it cute。

1. {cat}-可数名词,please add -s.
2. {because}作为连词连接两个完整的句子, 其后面的{it cute}并不是个完整的句子,它有主语I,也有表语形容词cute,但缺少系动词。同时主语it代指前面的cats, 是一个plural form, 所以要把it变成they。
3. {admire sth.} to look at sth and think that it is attractive and/or impressive.
表达欣赏赞美的眼光来观赏某物。
如:I am admiring my new car.
Let’s just sit and admire the view.
而句子中表达的是一种对事物的喜爱,所以我们可以使用如下用法。

I like cats because they are cute.
I love cats because they are cute.
I adore cats because they are cute.
I am fond of cats because they are cute.

They walk into the house.

good!

He turns into a monstor.

monster

I cherish my new shoes.

good!

My dog bite my paper.

{bite}- 已经结束的动作用过去时。
bite-bit

My dog bit my paper.

I turn down his permassion.

permission

She have readen book for 2 years.

1. {She}-the third person singular, please use {has}.
2. {read} 词形变化为现在时read, 过去时red, 过去分词即用于have/has done结构中时为red. please remember:read-red-red
3. {book}-countable noun. please use plural form.

She has red books for 2 years.

They saw a bird outside the window.

good!

Vocab by Mark-11-18

I hate to eat lunch.
Ok!

We admire game.
{Game} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
We admire games.

I contempt homework.
{Contempt} is a noun. We should say {show a contempt for something.}.
I show a contempt for homework.

A apple falls dawn.
{Apple} starts with a vowel and we use {an} as the article.
An apple falls dawn.

She despises dog.
{Dog} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
She despises dogs.

He eats pizzas.
Ok!

They cherish chicken.
Ok!

I shake my body.
Ok!

She jumps high.
Ok!

He contempts this team.
{Contempt} is a noun. We should say {show a contempt for something.}
He shows a contempt for this team.

Vocab by Mark-11-25

He attends a soccer game.
Ok!

They went to Mc Donald.
Ok!

We write a letter.
Ok!

She turns down him.
{Him} is a personal pronoun that should be placed between {turn} and {down}.
She turns him down.

My rabbit admire carrot.
{ My rabbit } is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {admire}.
{Carrot} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
My rabbit admires carrots.

He despises soccer.
{Soccer} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
He despises soccer.

His cat jumps at his home.
We always say {at home} or {in one’s home}.
His cat jumps at home.
His cat jumps in his home.

They cherish basketballs.
Ok!

I protect my cat.
Ok!

We attend a school.
Ok!

Vocab by Mark-11-24

He attend a party.
The third person singular.
He attends a party.

She drinks lemonade.
Ok!

Do you wants to go to the N Park.
Ok!

They hate him.
Ok!

We run to the market.
Ok!

My dog barks.
Ok!

I read a book.
Ok!

They admire computer.
{Computer} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
They admire computers.

He cherish his fish.
The third person singular. Add -es to the end of {cherish}.
He cherishes his fish.

They turn me down.
Ok!

Vocab by Mark-11-20

She hates to eats Pizza.

Remember {hate to do sth}.
{Pizza} is a countable noun.
Also, pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

She hates to eat pizzas.

We bite off the pieces off the meat.

There is an additional {off}. Delete it.

We bite the pieces off the meat.

They despise him.

Ok!

My cat runs around In my home.

Pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

My cat runs around in my home.

I contempt to read.

{Contempt} is a noun. We can say {show a contempt for sth}.

I show a contempt for reading.

A fish swims In water.

Pay attention to whether the letters should be uppercase or lowercase.

A fish swims in water.

cats cherishs its things.

The first letter of a sentence should be capitalized.
And the third person singular form for {cherish} is to add -es.
But {cats} are plural here, so use the original form of the verb.

Cats cherish their things.
The cat cherishes its things.

I admire dogs.

Good!

She likes to jog.

Good!

I despise writing.

Ok!