Mark -12-19-2023-10:36

I am a teacher!

good! but no need to use “!” at the end of this sentense.

She tasts nicely.

{tasts} 拼写错误
taste: 作为动词,是及物动词,后面要直接接object。
nicely 作为副词是修饰动词或者句子的,品尝的动作不是“nicely”,而味道应该是“nice”的。

She tastes it and it feels nice.

They became teachers.

good

He is a doctor.

good

We is pilots.

we(a first person plural pronoun. ) +are

We are pilots.

I feel fluffy fur.

good 但译为“触摸”的时候最好用touch
例句: feel the bump on my head
feel how rough this is.

She is a drawer.

good

drawer:出票人;抽屉
painter:画家

They is planter.

they( a third person plural pronoun. ) +are+ object(plural form)

They are planters.

He listens carefully.

good

I am a boss.

good

Vocab by owen-12-18

Cats loves to hide in the trees.
Ok!

Whe I saw a cat that had no fur, I was speechless.
Watch your spelling! You mean {when}?
When I saw a cat that had no fur, I was speechless.

Liger is bigger than a cat.
{Liger} is a countable noun. Add an article here.
A liger is bigger than a cat.

Cats like to chase bird wher the birds are sound.
{Bird} should be in a plural form. Also watch your spelling.
{Sound} is a noun or a linking verb.
Cats like to chase birds when the birds are making sound.

hobby (n) 爱好
I have many hobby.

{Hobby} is a countable noun. Use plural form here.
I have many hobbies.

They have many hobby.
The same problem mentioned above.
They have many hobbies.

Everyone have hobby.
{Everyone} is the third person singular, so we use {has} here.
Everyone has hobbies.

conversation (n) 交谈
I am in a conversation.
I hate to be in a conversation.

Ok!

Vocab by owen-12-18

conversation

They love to be in conversation.

{In conversation} is always used as an ongoing state.
You can say {have a conversation} or {sb. be in conversation}.

They love to have a conversation.
They are in conversation.

Mark -12-18-2023-12:57

I run fast.

good

She jumps high.

good

We swim fast.

good

I walk slow.

good

He reads fast.

good

A cat eat fast.

{A cat} is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {eat}.

A cat eats fast.

she hop high.

{she} is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {hop}.

she hops high.

They draw fast.

good

I write slow.

good

He shake fast.

{he} is the third person singular, so please add -s at the end of {shake}.

He shakes fast.

Lucas 20231215

S→subject
V→verb
O→object
n→noun

I(s) drink(v).

good

Daniel (s) jumps(v).

good

Mom(s) digs(v).

good

Babys(s) crawl(v).

good

Liam(s) dances(v).

good

The magic key(s) glowed(v).

good

We(s) had(v) a great time(o).

good

I(s) saw(v) Daniel(o) in the school.

good

I(s) ate(v) a carrot(o) yesterday.

good

Mark -12-16-2023-09:32

She is from Objibway.
He lives in Objibway.
I love Objibway.

good 虽然我不太知道Objibway在哪,但不妨碍你的句子的使用!

She pollutions water.
I will pollution the food.
We pollution earth.

1. pollution: uncountable noun.
air/water pollution 空气/水污染
The level of pollution in the river was falling.这条河中的污染物水平在下降。
它的动词形式: pollute
~ sth (by/with sth)(用某物)污染…
The river has been polluted with toxic waste from local factories.
它的形容词形式:polluted
the polluted river.被污染的河流

2.句子中不可用名词来做谓语动词成分:subject+v+object

She pollutes water.
I will pollute the food.
We pollute earth.

I have tears in my eyes.

good

His tears falls into a spoon.
Her tears falls out her eyes.

tears 本身就是复数形式 后面的动词无需改变-fall
fall out of… 从…掉下来

His tears fall into a spoon.
Her tears fall out of her eyes.

Chemical is danjuer.

chemical: countable noun
danjuer spelling mistake!
danger 是个名词,它的形容词:dangerous

Chemicals are dangerous.

I make chemicals.

good

He uses chemicals things.

chemical: 既可以是形容词也可以是可数名词。

He uses chemicals.名词
He uses chemical things.形容词

We have fire senses.
She only has 3 senses.
He breaks his 2 senses.

这里sense的用法很奇怪。
1. fire senses 这里指的是什么呢?
2. break 2 senses 也不会这么用, 如果我的某一个感官失灵,常用 lost my sense of …
例如:I completely lost my sense of taste and smell.

3.
sense:作名词讲, 它是个很灵活的单词,有很多含义。可译为“感官,意识,判断力, 意义”等等,但是要注意习惯搭配。
常见用法:
Dogs have a strong sense of smell. 狗的嗅觉很灵敏。
He felt a sense of loss.他感到失落。
a strong sense of duty 很强的责任感
He has a very good sense of direction.他的方向感很强。
There’s a lot of sense in what Mary says.玛丽说得很在理。
There’s no sense in worrying about it now.现在大可不必为那件事忧虑。
In a sense, it doesn’t matter any more.从某种意义上说,这事已无关紧要了。
This sentence doesn’t make sense.这个句子不通。

建议有关sense,重新再造,或者背诵例句

Essay by nina-12-15

Animals in the park

S→subject
V→verb
O→object
n→noun

When Grandpa(s) come(v)to visit(o)(noun), we (s)like(v)to go(o)for walk.
{Grandpa} is the third person singular, so add an -s at the end of {come}.
And we say {go for a walk}.
When Grandpa(s) comes(v)to visit(o), we (s)like(v)to go(o)for a walk.

First, we(s)go(v)to the store(o).
Ok!

Grandpa (s)buys(v)some seeds and nuts(o).
Ok!

Then we(s)go(v)to the park(o).
Ok!

Grandpa(s)shows(v)me(o/noun) how to feed the birds and squirrels.
Ok!

We(subject) give(verb) them seeds and nuts to eat. (noun) (to) (verb)

这句不太明白→Soon all the small animals come to me.
Soon(adv) all the small animals(s) come(v) to me.(o)

I (s)enjoy feeding them.→(noun)
Verb?

Doing is used as an object here.
I (s)enjoy(v) feeding them(o).

I(s)think(v)they(o/n)like seeds and nuts, and they (s)like(v)us(o/n)too.
There is a clause here.
I(s)think(v)(they like seeds and nuts)(clause of objective), and they (s)like(v)us(o/n)too.

Vocab by owen-12-14

Hastily (adv) 匆忙地
I hastily go to school.
I hastily finish my homework.
I hastily run to the station.

Good!

bin (n)
I hide in the bin.
The bin was big.
There were a big bin.

{A big bin} is singular, so we use {was} here.
There was a big bin.

Essay by owen-12-1

I hate mosquito.
{Mosquito} is a countable noun. You can say {a mosquito} or {mosquitos}.
I hate mosquitos.

There are mosquito at swamp.
The same problem mentioned above. Use {mosquitos} here.
And we always say {in swamp}.
There are mosquitos in swamp.

We riddance the mosquito away.
{Riddance} is a noun. You should use a verb here.
We drive the mosquito away.

protest (as a verb) is commonly used with preoposition ‘against’.
I protest against violence.
I protest against child abuse.

I protested I hate mosquito.
What you mean to say here is probably to complain:

I complain about mosquitoes.
I protest against mosquitoes

{Mosquito} is a countable noun. You can say {a mosquito} or {mosquitos}.
Also please keep the tense the same.
I protested that I hated mosquitos.

Mosquito drink blood.
The same problem mentioned before.
Mosquitos drink blood.